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L**5
Too confusing to pay for
Veronica’s stepdad wants her to have a babysitter and she can’t understand why, seeing that she’s 18 years old. She puts on a low cut mini dress to try to seduce her stepdad and get her way, but it doesn’t work. She gets a babysitter anyway, and he regresses her and introduces her to sex.Pros: Age play and sexual scene is hot.Cons: 1. Only one sexual scene, and according to the text, there was no penetration during the whole time.2. It’s confusing. When Veronica is awakened the next day by the babysitter, it says that he has a face she doesn’t recognize. But during their time together she calls him Daddy. Is it just because he’s referred to himself as Daddy? Then it says after a month her dad was getting ready to come home. The story hadn’t explained that he’d be gone for a whole month, where, or why. (Sorry, I just prefer details.) The morning of her Dad’s return, the babysitter bathes and dresses her, and by the time she’s dressed, her Dad is just there. Like he appeared out of nowhere. Not sure where the babysitter is at this point. Her Dad asks if he should get rid of the babysitter, she says no because she loves him. He says “I thought you might.” Then it ends. Say what now? This leaves me with a big question: was the babysitter actually the Daddy in a disguise or something, or did he actually pay a total strange, grown man, to come have sex with his daughter? And if so, why? So glad I read this Unlimited.
A**D
Underdeveloped Potential
A decent premise, with tons of under developed potential. Needed an editing pass as well. Definitely worth a KU read!
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